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Does Your Novel Pass the Bechdel Test?

Whew. So I’ve been gone for a few days. I’ve pulled two all-nighters in four days and taken two ten hour bus rides, to and from London, respectively.

It was a lovely albeit overwhelming weekend. London is all decked out in its Christmas swag, so just walking around was an adventure. And I made a personal pilgrimage to the Sherlock Holmes Museum at 221B Baker Street.

So, all in all, a successful weekend. I was this close to buying a deerstalker. Alas. No way to get it home without it being hopelessly squashed.

Today I want to talk about something I typically wouldn’t bring up voluntarily because, to be perfectly frank, I hear enough feminist rants from my friends and I’m sort of afraid of what will end up in the comment section. But I’m going to swallow my pride and talk about the Bechdel Test.

The Bechdel Test, for those of you who don’t know, is a simple formula for determining gender bias in fiction.

Here’s how to find out whether a given work of fiction (novel, movie, comic book, etc.) passes the Bechdel Test:

  1. Are there at least two [named] female characters?
  2. Do they talk to each other?
  3. About something other than a man?

If you answered ‘yes,’ to all three of these questions, congratulations. Whatever you were using as an example just passed the Bechdel Test.

If it seems overly simple, that’s because it is. However, it’s astounding how many popular books and movies don’t pass this test.

Here are a few notable (yet random) ones that do:

  1. Gone With the Wind
  2. Doubt
  3. Mean Girls
  4. Pride and Prejudice 
  5. Alien
  6. Chicago (but notice that on the poster the leading man is still front and center)
  7. Moulin Rouge
  8. The King’s Speech (by the skin of its teeth)
  9. Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland
  10. The Help

And here are a few major (but also random) ones that definitely don’t:

  1. The entire original Star Wars trilogy.
  2. The entire Lord of the Rings Trilogy.
  3. 80% of James Bond movies/books.
  4. 80% of Sherlock Holmes stories.
  5. The Departed
  6. The Dark Knight
  7. Treasure Island
  8. Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows Part II
  9. Fight Club
  10. Lord of the Flies

So these are just a few examples. Does passing the Bechdel Test guarantee that a work is feminist friendly? Absolutely not (Mean Girls, anyone?), but it’s a good question to ask anyway.

I realized, recently, and much to my own surprise, that a lot of my own work doesn’t pass. My most recently completed novel is a dubious pass, because while two of my named female characters do speak to each other, a man is in part subject of the conversation. On the whole, it’s a business interaction, however – they’re not talking about the man in a romantic capacity. So that would be a shaky pass at best. The novel I finished before that was historical fiction and almost overwhelmingly dominated by men. There were at least five named female characters (who all played pretty significant roles in the story), but there’s not a single significant conversation between any two of them that doesn’t somehow relate back to the men and what they’re up to. In my defense, the male-centric nature of society in 1815 is partly to blame. But still. That’s a fail. Looking at the five or so short stories I’ve written in the last two years, only one of them passes, though it does pass with flying colours. My NaNo novel, I’m pleased to say, has already passed the Bechdel Test and isn’t even finished. It’s a solid pass, but thanks to only one conversation. Again, the two main characters are male.

What does this say about me as a writer? I’m not really sure. It’s perfectly possible that I’m simply prone to writing male characters because of the genres I tend to write in: namely, historical and contemporary. Back in the eighteenth and nineteenth centuries, women didn’t get to do much so there wasn’t a whole lot to talk about besides what the men were doing and who was marrying whom. So perhaps that’s just an accurate reflection of the time and not evidence for misogyny.  But what about my contemporary work? What’s up with that?

Looking at everything I’ve written in the past few years and have so far planned to write in the next one or two, I have to admit that my stories are, for the most part, dominated by male characters. I’ve written a female protagonist a grand total of once (and it was for a short story, and a few of the people who read it mistook her for a guy).

I’m slightly ashamed of myself.

Don’t get me wrong, I’ve written some kickass female characters, but they’re almost always seen through a male lens. I’m not going to pretend to know why I’m so much more comfortable writing male leads (perhaps because I completely don’t understand women, despite being one of them), but I think I need to give a little more consideration to whether the genders are getting equal representation in my work. Maybe it doesn’t matter. But maybe it’s a symptom of a larger problem – i.e., the gross lack of a respectable female presence in the media.

What do you guys think? I’d love to get some outside opinions on this. How does your work hold against the Bechdel Test? When reading a book or watching a movie, does the male:female character ratio even occur to you? Do you think this is something to give real attention to, or a load of feminist propaganda designed to stir up trouble?

Let me know your thoughts!

Here’s a quick survey for you to take, if you want to help me gather some data. Does your novel pass the Bechdel Test?

In the meantime, I’m off to take a look at the supporting females in my NaNo novel. Becky’s out of the picture at the moment, but Robin’s about to show the boys who’s boss. Let’s beat that Bechdel Test down and make it beg for mercy.

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18 thoughts on “Does Your Novel Pass the Bechdel Test?

  1. Here’s my problem. How do you have two female characters have a conversation when you’re writing in first person from the POV of a guy?

    Although I’m not 100% sure my WIP doesn’t pass. It’s a very interesting situation–I have two characters, Noelle and Heartstring. Noelle is the love interest, and Heartstring is one of my MC’s fellow heroes that’s kind of his mentor but also kind of planning his death sentence. And the plot twist is that they’re actually the same person, but -she- has something of a multiple personality disorder and they’re two separate people in -her- head. So they’ve sort of talked to each other, due to being the same person except not. I’d love to hear your thoughts on this.

    • Wow! That’s a heck of situation you’ve got there. I think if you think it passes the test, you can say it does. I’m pretty sure there’s no precedent for what you’re describing.

      • I’ll just go with maybe it does, maybe it doesn’t, and if it doesn’t it doesn’t matter because every other thing I’ve written does. This is the first time I’ve written something from a guy’s perspective.

      • Today I had a wonderful discovery–one of my other female characters ended up in the same scene as Heartstring/Noelle, and they ended up talking to each other. I did not plan this. But now I officially pass. Yay!

  2. Interesting test! Even though my books are pretty evenly divided between male and female characters and my protagonist is almost always a woman, I still *barely* pass because most of the female-female conversations eventually bring up the men. I also tend to write very male-centered genres, but I don’t think that’s a very good excuse for passing over all the other possible dynamics of a female-female relationship. :S

  3. My novel technically fails this test, but I think it’s more a symptom of not having enough characters in general than anything else.

    Seems like all my NaNo novels tend to fail this, though, whereas novels I wrote at other times don’t. Weird. Wonder why that is.

  4. I was really interested to read this, because of something that’s been on my mind for a while: almost all of my favourite authors are male. Iris Murdoch is the only female writer who makes it onto my list of favourites. For the record, and in no particular order:

    William Golding, Jim Crace, Iris Murdoch, Russell Hoban, W. Somerset Maugham, Ian McEwan, Mervyn Peake, Roald Dahl…

    I don’t think of myself as a feminist, but it makes me feel weird (as a female writer myself) that most of my favourite writers are male.. any thoughts?? =D

    • It’s interesting that you say that, because with the notable exception of J. K. Rowling, I feel very much the same! It may have something to do with what you’re inclined to read vs. what women are inclined to write.

      • I think you’re right. It just disappoints me that women aren’t inclined to write what I want to read. I don’t see any reason why they shouldn’t :( I guess it’s like Benjamin Disraeli said – ‘When I want to read a book, I write one.’ we have to write the books we want to read..

      • Agreed. I think there’s an additional struggle for female authors to succeed in genres that are so traditionally ‘male.’ This is a large part of the reason that some female authors pick masculine or androgynous surnames.

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  6. Of the things I’ve written in the last year, there are only two where I don’t have more than one named woman, both of which are more or less one-on-one stories where the characters spend nearly all their time talking about each other. So I’m pretty good there.

    And then I have one with four women talking about gargoyles . . . pass with colors there.

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  8. Both of my major WIPs pass the test. I find that my writing sheds light on a lot of feminist issues – even if it’s an ugly one. My novel’s protagonist who sees the world around her as hostile due to sexual objectification she has not asked for or deserved. It took me a long time to make my novel into something besides a feminist rant! (or the opposite where females were only playthings of the men and not worthwhile characters on their own).

    I find that I have to really look at my own gender bias and my own assumptions, because it’s hard to strip myself of that habit in some ways. Just looking at it critically does help.

    I do agree with melanonce – it’s very hard for women to break into some genres. Entertainment pollsters have found that by and large, women will read / watch something that has been targeted at men, but men will not read / watch something targeted at women. Think about a girl watching “Movies for guys who like movies” vs. a guy watching Lifetime. Which is cooler? Which is more acceptable?

  9. Mine has plenty of female characters, and they seldom talk about men, except in the chapter where they discuss how to bypass the rules and let women vote to elect a female mayor :) . On the other hand, very few of the women/girls (and none of the central ones) has a typical relationship with any male. I didn’t set out to do that, it just happened.

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